Hello guys welcome back to part 3 of Do all volcanoes look the same? This slide show is writing I have done one of the slides is a sick sentence turned into a good sentence and a descriptive writing about an eruption
Kia ora Jarvis. You have certainly improved those sentences. I particularly like how you wrote about the 'blazing terrain' and how it was 'horrifying to watch, sending shivers down your spine.' I also really like your stretched sentence. You are using what we are learning to create a detailed sentence. I wonder what is going to happen next, once the volcano becomes angry?
Kia ora Jarvis. You have certainly improved those sentences. I particularly like how you wrote about the 'blazing terrain' and how it was 'horrifying to watch, sending shivers down your spine.' I also really like your stretched sentence. You are using what we are learning to create a detailed sentence. I wonder what is going to happen next, once the volcano becomes angry?
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