It’s Charlotte here, a commenter for Manaiakalani. Ka Pai on your post, I noticed that you wrote 2 stories about the dotterel, I didn’t know much about dotterels before this so thank you for sharing!
Why did you decide to write about dotterels? What is your favourite fact about them? My favourite bird is the pukeko, just like the dotterel, the pukeko are also vegetarians (mostly).
Great job including references, it is important to let our readers know where we got our information from. I noticed that there was an ‘awesome word’ section on your planning template, next time, it would be great to see you include some new, awesome words in your stories!
kia ora jarvis its Sal from room 24 i really like this blog post because it is descriptive and it looked like you put lots of effort into making this and i loved your story. how long did it take you to make this? Blog you later.
Mōrena Jarvis,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Charlotte here, a commenter for Manaiakalani. Ka Pai on your post, I noticed that you wrote 2 stories about the dotterel, I didn’t know much about dotterels before this so thank you for sharing!
Why did you decide to write about dotterels? What is your favourite fact about them? My favourite bird is the pukeko, just like the dotterel, the pukeko are also vegetarians (mostly).
Great job including references, it is important to let our readers know where we got our information from. I noticed that there was an ‘awesome word’ section on your planning template, next time, it would be great to see you include some new, awesome words in your stories!
Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
kia ora jarvis its Sal from room 24 i really like this blog post because it is descriptive and it looked like you put lots of effort into making this and i loved your story.
ReplyDeletehow long did it take you to make this?
Blog you later.