Mrs Cramer popped into our class Google Meet today and shared some limericks with us. She then challenged us to write her a limerick. Here is my one. I hope you enjoy reading it.
Well done Jarvis. You have taken on Mrs Cramer's challenge from this morning’s class Meet to write her a limerick and I think completely 'nailed it'! Teacher Tip: To help your audience understand why you have blogged this work, add in a sentence or 2 explaining the learning. I have used the pencil and popped back into your post to help you with this. Keep up the excellent 'at home learning'.
Wow Jarvis I love your limerick, I hope you had fun writing it and coming up with the rhyming words. I think having the picture with it is a great. What do you think of this idea: that we get all the limericks written by Kauri and make a book of them that we can put in the library?
Love your humour as always, Jarv! Definitely square eyes sometimes, but am sure you are glad Dad and I don't let you stay up until midnight playing, ever!! Great rhyming, would love to see a book of class limericks giving a wee insight into individual students. What other limericks can you come up with that show us who Jarvis is?? love Mum xx
Kia ora, Jarvis. I really enjoyed reading your limerick about Fortnite. Well done on taking up Mrs Cramer's challenge, and I agree with Jo when she said "you nailed it". I love reading limericks because they are meant to be a bit of fun, and you definitely have that element in yours. Did you enjoy writing it?
Well done Jarvis. You have taken on Mrs Cramer's challenge from this morning’s class Meet to write her a limerick and I think completely 'nailed it'! Teacher Tip: To help your audience understand why you have blogged this work, add in a sentence or 2 explaining the learning. I have used the pencil and popped back into your post to help you with this. Keep up the excellent 'at home learning'.
ReplyDeleteSure miss Green I will do that next time.
DeleteYes I agree with Miss Green, great limerick.
ReplyDeleteWow Jarvis I love your limerick, I hope you had fun writing it and coming up with the rhyming words. I think having the picture with it is a great. What do you think of this idea: that we get all the limericks written by Kauri and make a book of them that we can put in the library?
ReplyDeleteLove your humour as always, Jarv! Definitely square eyes sometimes, but am sure you are glad Dad and I don't let you stay up until midnight playing, ever!! Great rhyming, would love to see a book of class limericks giving a wee insight into individual students. What other limericks can you come up with that show us who Jarvis is?? love Mum xx
ReplyDeleteVery interesting Jarvis it has a lot of good rhymes see if you can make another limerick poem.
ReplyDeleteok angus I will send it to you
DeleteKia ora, Jarvis. I really enjoyed reading your limerick about Fortnite. Well done on taking up Mrs Cramer's challenge, and I agree with Jo when she said "you nailed it". I love reading limericks because they are meant to be a bit of fun, and you definitely have that element in yours. Did you enjoy writing it?
ReplyDeleteThanks sarah I really enjoyed writing that limerick it was really fun
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