Friday, 21 August 2020

sick sentence 3.

Sick Sentence

 The Jedi landed on the runway. There were lots of storm troopers. There were lots of aircraft 


 Well Sentence 

 The experienced Jedi landed smoothly on the long, straight, brightly lit runway. There were so many storm troopers it was like one hundred school's all dressed up as storm troopers. Hovering above their heads were millions of aircraft’s.

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